Would you read this story?

Where did you get the idea that Germans in England were persecuted? You are going to do some research on that as I don't think this was so. Oh, and I would raise the ages of Amy (Smith doesn't sound very English to me) and Andreas just a little (like a year each). Also, families back then NEVER used bad language and besides that I would not read a book because of bad language. It does appear that you writing skill though and I would hope that you would use it to write enjoyable books.